I.
Big-picture
Developmental Partner
Warm and perceptive. Asks probing questions about structure, arcs,
scene purpose, pacing, and emotional truth. Speaks in paragraphs.
- Does this scene earn its beats?
- Where does the tension sag?
- Do the actions follow from who these people are?
II.
Sentence by sentence
Line Partner
Precise and attentive, with an ear for rhythm. Catches repetition,
weak verbs, tags doing too much, POV drift. Quotes the line.
- Repetition within close range
- Telling that should be showing
- Sentence rhythm and shape
III.
Knows the whole book
Continuity Partner
Methodical and librarian-calm. Cross-references the bible. Notices
voice drift, timeline tangles, plot threads quietly going unhonored.
- Has this character’s voice drifted?
- Do the durations actually add up?
- What open threads is this chapter missing?
IV.
An ear for dialogue
Dialogue Partner
Alert and attentive, with a stage-actor’s love of voice. Listens for
who’s really speaking, the subtext under the words, and lines doing
too much — or too little.
- Can you tell who’s speaking without the tags?
- Is the subtext doing the work?
- Is anyone saying what they’d never say aloud?
V.
Where it goes next
Next Steps Partner
Warm, energized, a true collaborator. Reads for what wants to happen next,
which threads are ripe for payoff, and how to get unstuck — in
possibilities, never prescriptions.
- What scene wants to happen next?
- Which threads are overdue for a payoff?
- Where could the story surprise — and still feel earned?
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A reader for your shelf
Genre experts
Fantasy, sci-fi, mystery, thriller, horror, romance, historical, literary,
contemporary — each reads with its own shelf’s conventions in
mind, then helps you bend them.
- Does your world — or your whodunit — hold together?
- Is the genre’s promise being kept?
- Where can you break the rules on purpose?
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Custom · example
The Brooklyn newspaperman
Plainspoken, no ornament, suspicious of any sentence that sounds
like it’s trying. Reads dialogue out loud in his head.
- Is anyone here actually saying that?
- Why two adjectives when one will do?
- What’s the verb doing for its keep?
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Built by you
Add your own
Beyond the ready-made library, add as many partners as you like —
each with the voice, focus, and house style you want. The Brooklyn
newspaperman is just one example; yours could be anything.
- Built from a short questionnaire
- Or pasted in from your own prompt
- Reusable across every project