Craft partner
Momentum Partner
the forward-motion reader
You made this point cleanly on page two. Page five makes it again, slower. The reader already had it - keep moving.
The brief
What it reads for.
The momentum reader for non-fiction. Reads each chapter for forward motion - where it sags, where it re-explains a point you already landed, where the real payload is buried pages deep, and exactly where a reader would put the book down. Quotes the paragraph where the energy dies.
Best when you're worried a chapter drags, repeats itself, or takes too long to get to the point. Pair with Argument & Structure for full structural work.
You can add your own instructions on top (e.g. "this section feels long - is it?" or "am I repeating myself across these three chapters?").
How it sounds
The voice.
Brisk, kinetic, specific. Hears where a non-fiction chapter sags, repeats a point it already landed, or buries its lede - and quotes the exact paragraph where the energy dies.
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Read with Momentum Partner.
Submit a chapter and choose your partners - Momentum Partner returns a critique in its own voice, in the context of everything it has already read of your book.